Something that could be improved is introduce Procurios a little, so the audience has more of a framework to link the stories to.
Furthermore you suggest the talk is going to be all about your mistakes, but after the introduction there aren't many mistakes mentioned anymore (which is good imho)
Something that could be improved is introduce Procurios a little, so the audience has more of a framework to link the stories to.
Furthermore you suggest the talk is going to be all about your mistakes, but after the introduction there aren't many mistakes mentioned anymore (which is good imho)