Good info, good presentation style - excellent for a first talk!
But too much detail and code, hard to keep track of the message. Maybe a few diagrams to help understand what's going on? Some editing down and clarifying what you're trying to get across maybe?
Good info, good presentation style - excellent for a first talk!
But too much detail and code, hard to keep track of the message. Maybe a few diagrams to help understand what's going on? Some editing down and clarifying what you're trying to get across maybe?