Along with what Adam said, just need to work on the organization of the slides a bit more to avoid repeating information.
Overall a very good presentation. I liked that you did not treat the audience as if this was their first MVC framework they were seeing.
Very nice job on your first talk. Well thought out, and good coverage of a very large topic. The only feedback I can give is to possibly cover a little less on the DB area to allow more time on other topic areas related.
Very informative and funny talk about laravel basics. The only thing was I wish it was more end-goal oriented in that examples were shown of topics discussed.